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Toxoiid
Is it possible to write a compelling story with just one character?
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Hope you like it. Just tried...Reply if liked...... any one want to make it .... I'm ready to sell....(for free ...may be)
guy in room.
writing a note (suicide note) , " I'm responsible for my death , I don't blame any body ."
sits keeps quite for a while staring at the note ,to side of it is some medical report.......
alarm rings 6
.m .....
gets up takes a key and leaves out......
comes back with few shopped items with him.......
takes out one by one ........
lot of chocolates and cakes , ice cream (sweet bakery items)
Women Dress and their inerwear and cosmetics.
at last , beer bottle and poison bottle.
Takes a t look at time .it's night 8 p.m almost ,
Goes for shower , standing still under shower ..........
.......suddenly enters room nude, sits quite ....later looks for some magazine (may be porn magazine).....
takes it ...leaves it back , as if loosing interest , falls back to bed ......
fade out .
fade in,
scene , back in shower ......
In front of mirror , shaving ..clean shaving.
........shower.........
.....................
In room , In front of mirror.....
Opening the cosmetics box .....does make up starting with lip stick ........ then chin powder ...
don't even know some of them where and how to use... eyeliner.....
.........
Two pair of innerwear in front of him . pink and red .....
STANDING wearing pink under wear (PANTY ) .........
picks up bra, pink one .........
Now , in front of mirror...
Doesn't say any thing , but his eyes says he is loving himself in this pose/fashion.
Looks for dress......wears it .....
Now wears a wig of a lady hair style........
Thought .....Brings a camera .....clicks self ....
checks the copy.......leaves it being no more interested.
On dinning table (in women dress )....... In front is all kinds of sweet items from which he had been restricted.........
Beer bottles and poison bottle too........bites sweet cakes one after other......sipping beer in other hand, staring at poison bottle.........
picks up poison bottle along with other beer bottle..... goes and sits on bed.... sipping beer
Fade out...
Fade in ..........
in bathroom ... pukes.........
falls on bed ..............
fade out
fade in ...
alarm 6.a.m.........
wakes up ......looks at his dress....
stands in front of mirror......
lipstick gone weird ...wig is out.... bra strip poping out......
Tries to cry.....can't .....
later..... stops to cry ...can't .... tears come out ......
controls weeping ...makes up mind ....looks for something in ....
picks medical paper ....checks paper and types a number in mobile..... leaving the paper ........
Paper says .........(some medical report )....
Toxoiid
Is it possible to write a compelling story with just one character?
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Hope you like it. Just tried...Reply if liked...... any one want to make it .... I'm ready to sell....(for free ...may be)
guy in room.
writing a note (suicide note) , " I'm responsible for my death , I don't blame any body ."
sits keeps quite for a while staring at the note ,to side of it is some medical report.......
alarm rings 6
.m .....gets up takes a key and leaves out......
comes back with few shopped items with him.......
takes out one by one ........
lot of chocolates and cakes , ice cream (sweet bakery items)
Women Dress and their inerwear and cosmetics.
at last , beer bottle and poison bottle.
Takes a t look at time .it's night 8 p.m almost ,
Goes for shower , standing still under shower ..........
.......suddenly enters room nude, sits quite ....later looks for some magazine (may be porn magazine).....
takes it ...leaves it back , as if loosing interest , falls back to bed ......
fade out .
fade in,
scene , back in shower ......
In front of mirror , shaving ..clean shaving.
........shower.........
.....................
In room , In front of mirror.....
Opening the cosmetics box .....does make up starting with lip stick ........ then chin powder ...
don't even know some of them where and how to use... eyeliner.....
.........
Two pair of innerwear in front of him . pink and red .....
STANDING wearing pink under wear (PANTY ) .........
picks up bra, pink one .........
Now , in front of mirror...
Doesn't say any thing , but his eyes says he is loving himself in this pose/fashion.
Looks for dress......wears it .....
Now wears a wig of a lady hair style........
Thought .....Brings a camera .....clicks self ....
checks the copy.......leaves it being no more interested.
On dinning table (in women dress )....... In front is all kinds of sweet items from which he had been restricted.........
Beer bottles and poison bottle too........bites sweet cakes one after other......sipping beer in other hand, staring at poison bottle.........
picks up poison bottle along with other beer bottle..... goes and sits on bed.... sipping beer
Fade out...
Fade in ..........
in bathroom ... pukes.........
falls on bed ..............
fade out
fade in ...
alarm 6.a.m.........
wakes up ......looks at his dress....
stands in front of mirror......
lipstick gone weird ...wig is out.... bra strip poping out......
Tries to cry.....can't .....
later..... stops to cry ...can't .... tears come out ......
controls weeping ...makes up mind ....looks for something in ....
picks medical paper ....checks paper and types a number in mobile..... leaving the paper ........
Paper says .........(some medical report )....