archived-videos Star Trip: The ...What? Generation - A Camp Sci-Fi Comedy in Spandex

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A short video a few friends and I put together.
It began as a Star Trek: Next Gen spoof, but became this twisted Star Trek inspired amalgamation that takes elements from multiple Star Trek series, sexual overtones and some crude humor.
Warning: May be offensive.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y_pm0RpH0hc
Hope you guys like it, it's my first attempt at making a short with some buddies, so feedback would be great!

2/23/13
The IMAX 3-D Re-Re-Re-Release
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jydQRvd8QVs

03/04/13
Now on Funny or Die!
http://www.funnyordie.com/videos/671b4e8b54/star-trip-the-what-generation
 
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Hey everyone! I have a little update for y'all.
Thanks to the help of a very kind man who prefers to stay anonymous: We have re-released a new cut of the episode "Encounter at Candilandia"
NEW music!
MODERN effects!
SLIGHTLY ALTERED footage!
Hope y'all check out the new cut, it addresses a lot of technical problems people had with it.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jydQRvd8QVs

Let me know what y'all think! Hope you like it!
 
It took me a minute to get into it, but once I fell into the mood of the humor, I got quite a few chuckles out of it.

But then, after they reach the planet, it gets REALLY talky, without much of a direction or pay-off. I kinda feel like the vast majority of the interactions with the candy alien could be cut, taking us right to the punch-line with the baseball bat. I know that you wrote that dialog with a specific purpose, but I'm not sure that the intended purposed has been achieved. I think a much more tight, whippy-snappy, irreverent comedy might be a lot more fun. Regardless, I see that you had a good time making this, and I enjoyed watching it. :)
 
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It took me a minute to get into it, but once I fell into the mood of the humor, I got quite a few chuckles out of it.

But then, after they reach the planet, it gets REALLY talky, without much of a direction or pay-off. I kinda feel like the vast majority of the interactions with the candy alien could be cut, taking us right to the punch-line with the baseball bat. I know that you wrote that dialog with a specific purpose, but I'm not sure that the intended purposed has been achieved. I think a much more tight, whippy-snappy, irreverent comedy might be a lot more fun. Regardless, I see that you had a good time making this, and I enjoyed watching it. :)
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Thank you so much so for watching!
I hear exactly what you're saying. After releasing it, a lot of people have similar feelings towards the video.
I'll definitely keep it in mind for the next one!
 
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