archived-videos St Paul - Short Film

First, let me say it looks really nice. You can tell you guys put some effort into this.



Now about this none belief thing. It seems it is in the background. Almost like a secondary theme in

the plot. What stuck out to me was the lead doing ordinary guy things. Its almost like we're

watching a telenovela "but oh yea, he doesn't believe in god either." The story might have been

more compelling if there were better examples that were testing his faith. For instance, the car

accident he was in, it seem you guys just kinda gloss right over that. Most examples that were

eleborated on were happening to other people. Personally I would have like dot see this guy put

through the wringer. That way we have no doubt that his faith is being tested. All around I thought

the pacing was a little slow as well.


I enjoyed it.
 
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