archived-videos Springtime - Montage

This film is not bad. It doesn't infuriate me like many of the films posted here.

The depth of focus, rack focusing, and the color all look great, but perhaps you can improve some of the compositions. Some of them appear a bit random.

I like the one with the bird on the feeder, though.

The film itself is quite random, too. You're not really telling a story--it looks kind of like you just threw together a bunch of shots from your backyard. Think about your viewers--what do you want them to feel? Manipulate them.
 
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Yeah, this doesn't really belong in "narrative". That's some nice footage, though. Nice colors, and good composition, in my opinion.
 
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