archived-videos Someone Like You (Short Film) - Feedback Please

[maxelali]

Hi there,

I'm new to these forums. I'm 18 years old and i've been making films for the past 7 years. 'Somone Like You' is a film i made a year ago (2009) that won 'Best Film', 'Best Director' and 'Best Actress' in a film competition. Please take a look and give me your feedback. Much appreciated!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z6HjVbnDPYE

 

[Murdock]

HAH 8600 miles and the ringer sounds the same. @9:05 come on dude, there must be some other way for us to feel sorry for

this guy. First, the "my bad childhood" bit is superfluous. Just go straight into his story. Ie."why does...memories" "My mom died

when I was born..." She does a good job. Liam comes across as a snivelling little winer. The part itself was "needy" and he was

over acting a bit. Good film all round. What did you film on??

 

[maxelali]

haha thanks! I filmed this one on an older Panasonic model, the: MD 10000