M max70 Oct 30, 2004 #1 hello this is my first completed screenplay. i had it registered in the wga and made a copyright of it, playing it safe. could someone give me an honest critique. i just want some more feed back because next step is to make a full feature digital movie. thanks
hello this is my first completed screenplay. i had it registered in the wga and made a copyright of it, playing it safe. could someone give me an honest critique. i just want some more feed back because next step is to make a full feature digital movie. thanks
M max70 Nov 10, 2004 #21 I forgot to mention the screenplay is based on a true story. Upvote 0 Downvote
N Nick Nov 11, 2004 #24 ^no wonder you have good character development, like Will said. Upvote 0 Downvote
