archived-videos Soda Machine Prank: The First Video I have Directed

[TheMutualMatt]

First of all I am new to this forum, and I just directed a video. Its not the first video that I have directed but it is what I think is the best. I was hoping to get some feedback on what I can do better next time!

My video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CmNhsW6mbx0

If anyone knows a better place or forum for me, that would be amazing! (this was the best forum I could find)

With great appreciation
-Matt

 

[GuerrillaAngel]

You're getting the hang of it -- more practice will get you on your way.

Avoid the zoom. Seriously, no zoom!

Try to do something about blown whites (in some of the shots) -- distracting.

Good luck!