archived-videos Sigmund Freud's Fruit and Nut Bar- A Short Film

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No Budget. Filmed on a Nikon D5100. Student/ Rookie Film.

http://youtu.be/gM_e9mcLx8E

 

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I would really appreciate some feedback. I'm open to constructive criticism.

 

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Thanks you all for not watching.

 

[justinisfilming]

Really good compositions and nice opening sequence (I liked how it synced with the music). Very interesting concept as well and I dug the symbolism all around the piece.

Just a technical issue, don't zoom with a variable aperture lens. It doesn't look good.

Good job.

 

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Really good compositions and nice opening sequence (I liked how it synced with the music). Very interesting concept as well and I dug the symbolism all around the piece.

Just a technical issue, don't zoom with a variable aperture lens. It doesn't look good.

Good job.

Thanks! What kind of lens would you recommend using to zoom?

 

[ChimpPhobiaFilms]

Good short with an interesting, witty, and intelligent concept. But I thought the opening credits were unnecessary, some of the shots were over-exposed, and it went on a bit too long.