archived-videos [SHORTLISTED FOR AWARD]My Name is Tayyab

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Hi Everybody,
Recently I made a film for a global competition ran by the tony blair faith foundation and I was shortlisted, the film is an islamic film, so please, if you have any racist thoughts, keep them to yourself? :)

I'd like some feedback please :) In December I'll be going to the BAFTA in London, and I'll meet Hugh Jackman, Jet Li, and some other actors.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=shwM48EPMfg

Link to Competition Shortlist page:
http://www.tonyblairfaithfoundation.org/pages/faith-shorts-2011-shortlist
 
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The first 15 seconds drew me in, but beyond that there was nothing visually interesting to keep from clicking "X". I quit watching at 1:22. Film is a visual medium and the film relied on voiceover to keep the viewers watching. I hope your VO is compelling enough to get your intended audience to view the entire film.

Good luck.
 
GuerrillaAngel said:
The first 15 seconds drew me in, but beyond that there was nothing visually interesting to keep from clicking "X". I quit watching at 1:22. Film is a visual medium and the film relied on voiceover to keep the viewers watching. I hope your VO is compelling enough to get your intended audience to view the entire film.

Good luck.
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Hmm.. ok thanks for the feedback, I'll work on it on my next project.
 
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