watch Short Tutorial I Made

[Vihtic]

I made this guide on how to make a mechanical pencil airsoft contraption a few days ago.
(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nHnW7UihSZU
I think I did a pretty good job, but I'd really like some constructive criticism and references to fields I can improve on. Thanks!

 

[justinisfilming]

Very well done! Kept me watching the whole time. I also liked the caution you gave at the end.

I guess if there's something to critique, it will be your background. A white table should work better than the 2 pieces of paper.

 

[Vihtic]

Very well done! Kept me watching the whole time. I also liked the caution you gave at the end.

I guess if there's something to critique, it will be your background. A white table should work better than the 2 pieces of paper.

I agree. What I wanted originally was a green screen so I could change the background accordingly but I still need to purchase some material and more lights.

Thanks

 

[TheAwesomeBuilder]

I like it! It looks like one of my gun tutorials but then better!

 

[knightly]

I'd check the white balance (it's a bit yellow/orange throughout), or color correct toward blue a touch to get the whites (use the pen parts to hit the black balance, then the paper on the table to adjust the white balance).

the audio and video play together nicely to illustrate the process, never a moment when I yelled "skip ahead" at the screen like I do with many other tutorials.

 

[Vihtic]

I'd check the white balance (it's a bit yellow/orange throughout), or color correct toward blue a touch to get the whites (use the pen parts to hit the black balance, then the paper on the table to adjust the white balance).

the audio and video play together nicely to illustrate the process, never a moment when I yelled "skip ahead" at the screen like I do with many other tutorials.

Thanks! I only recently started to learn how to truly color correct, so I'm a bit sloppy at it but I'll take what you said into consideration