archived-videos Short: "Three guns"

Hi People from indietalk,

As many here, I've done a movie, I'm a director, lalala, and my next movie is to be release end of Jan. I have a teaser that I'd like you guys to have a look at.

What I quite like with this forum is Premier members and Guru are honest with their comments (and sometimes Reeaaalllly down to earth/kick in the face type comments - which is good!).

It's always nice to hear "that's good" or "I like it" but feel free to say "this scene is horrible" or "wtf is he doing with the dialogue?"

so please help yourself with my trailer:

http://vimeo.com/17969644

Title: "Three Guns"

Pitch:
Three murderers are competing to kill the same target.

Synopsis:
Winston is contacted by Lenny a powerful local mobster over a series of murders in Lenny's gang. Lenny asks Winston to find and kill the people responsible for this, to which Winston agrees. Winston faces a real challenge as the job isn't easy and involves dangerous individuals but Winston eventually finds a way to fulfil his objective: he's hiring three murderers and the first murderer to get the job done will get the reward.
 
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@mitter: sorry didn't see the previous post! thanks for the feedback.

One other thing I'm still no entirely sure: do people understand the story? it's hard to say when you had your head in the movie for nearly 9 months!
 
I realise that I'm not contributing much given that I didn't watch it all the way through (sorry!) but the opening looks a lot like my street :)

If I have time later, I'll watch the rest...
 
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