Hey guys,
Okay, so... Here is the screenplay for my short, short, short movie "The Blind Date":
https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&...JiNmItMzUwN2EzMjI5NDhi&hl=en&authkey=CIrv4I0E
It's a thriller/horror. Only five pages, so I was hoping a few of you may read through it and let me know what you think. Does it work? Do you understand it? I've had to break a few formatting rules in writing it, as it involves silent, subtitled images/actions overlapped with completely seperate dialogue (I know, that doesn't really make sense, but hopefully it will if you read the script!!). Can anybody think of any problems that a viewer might have when watching this?
I'm thinking this will be the first thing I shoot, very crudely, on the cheap, purely as a piece on which to practice some very basic lighting and to try and learn some editing and pacing. Audio shouldn't be a problem, as I wouldn't be recording any sync sound, so I should be able to come up with something half-way decent.
Let me know your thoughts!
Cheers.
Okay, so... Here is the screenplay for my short, short, short movie "The Blind Date":
https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&...JiNmItMzUwN2EzMjI5NDhi&hl=en&authkey=CIrv4I0E
It's a thriller/horror. Only five pages, so I was hoping a few of you may read through it and let me know what you think. Does it work? Do you understand it? I've had to break a few formatting rules in writing it, as it involves silent, subtitled images/actions overlapped with completely seperate dialogue (I know, that doesn't really make sense, but hopefully it will if you read the script!!). Can anybody think of any problems that a viewer might have when watching this?
I'm thinking this will be the first thing I shoot, very crudely, on the cheap, purely as a piece on which to practice some very basic lighting and to try and learn some editing and pacing. Audio shouldn't be a problem, as I wouldn't be recording any sync sound, so I should be able to come up with something half-way decent.
Let me know your thoughts!
Cheers.