Check out this trailer for my short film Thicker Than Water which will be released in 2014. Let us know what you think. http://youtu.be/PEtcvD71AAQ
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Looks FUCKING AWESOME.
Looks really good, visually really nice, and a good song. Hard to get much more from it that that.
Critique: The music going quieter and softer was a bit jarring. Maybe have the sound fade at the end (even if just a really short fade) - the sudden stop is similarly jarring. I didn't like your font choices, either - to me they felt a bit cheesy and amateurish compared to the rest of your visuals. The grading on the field stuffs is pushed a little toooo far for my tastes as well. But I'm pretty intrigued.
Critique: The music going quieter and softer was a bit jarring. Maybe have the sound fade at the end (even if just a really short fade) - the sudden stop is similarly jarring. I didn't like your font choices, either - to me they felt a bit cheesy and amateurish compared to the rest of your visuals. The grading on the field stuffs is pushed a little toooo far for my tastes as well. But I'm pretty intrigued.
Love the slow introduction and I'm excited to see the whole film 
