I just finished writing a short film and I feel very strongly for the characters and the story but I would like to ask those of you who understand story more than myself to give it a read and let me know what works and what doesn't. Please be as critical as possible. Your comments will be appreciated and help me to tell a better story.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1d2mjRR0m01CFH24WjBIloKK_qNuI9YGn1_Oe2141Lx0/edit
Thanks - Aaron
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1d2mjRR0m01CFH24WjBIloKK_qNuI9YGn1_Oe2141Lx0/edit
Thanks - Aaron