archived-videos Short Drama: The Play

[DingbatComedies]

I know my username is DingbatComedies, but here I am with a drama!

Synopsis: A love struck guy goes to a girls play with the intent of asking her out after. A wrench is thrown into his plan when he sits next to her ex-boyfriend.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N51dBKGLlaI

Feedback welcome!

 

[Michael Allen]

As always it's thumbs up from me.

Script, acting and timing. Tick, tick and tick.

 

[ThatGuyFromThatPlace]

Needlessly shaky camera at the beginning, and the production logo could probably have some work done to it.

The acting was a tad too much, and the ex-boyfriend seems to mess up the timing on his lines quite a lot.

The shot cuts with the time jumps in the cinema were pretty off-tone. The ending was way too abrupt and predictable.

It was... pretty okay, I'll give you that, but most areas of it need quite a bit of work before it'll be close to seeming professional.

 

[Murdock]

I agree with ThatGuy.

I did enjoy it. Its funny cause its true.