editing Screengrabs from today's shoot.

Just wanted to share with some screengrabs from one of the scenes we shot earlier today.
Such a busy busy day!

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I think these look really great!

Just a couple of minor critiques that I'm assuming you want to hear -- in scene 47, at the 1:14 mark, there's a bit of an incontinuity with the dude's head changing position. You can probably get away with it, but it was enough to make me go "whoa", and I wasn't looking for errors. And then in scene 55, I'm sure you're already well aware of when the focus is a little soft. Just my two cents -- particularly around the :44 mark, I think an alternate shot would be better, even if you have to cut away to a reaction shot.

Regardless, looks great! I'm glad you see this project moving along.
 
Thank you CF! I'll definitely check out the dude's head. Haven't noticed it!

The soft focus - unfortunately i noticed that :( In this take, an actress got really into the character and did the finger pointing gesture as I was rolling. My dumb-butt didn't catch that little movement until I started editing the footage.. In another take she kept her hands below the frame..
oh well.

I'll just say I did a piss-poor focus pull on purpose.. . That was a stylistic choice, to keep a portion of the shot out of focus that is.. ahem.. don't judge me.. i do art.. :rolleyes: :lol:
 
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