archived-videos Schiffer - Horror/Thriller Short Film by Fabio Alves

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Hello guys,
So it's been 4 months since I started this project called "Schiffer" and all this time later I finally posted the Short Film Trailer and I was hoping you could judge my work, the trailer is 1min long so if you got one minute for me please go to the trailer and leave a comment and tell me if the trailer gets you excited to see it :D
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N29O6eskga4 ( if the player doesnt work )
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N29O6eskga4
 
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Nikola Damov said:
Remove the voice over.

It was so cheesy that the film started to look like a comedy.
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I'd agree with this. I think I downloaded the same pack of trailer voices, but that was for use on a spoof-style thing. They are impossible to take seriously :)
 
I agree with the voice over thing. Whoever did it did a good job but it was very cliche.

I'm definitely excited to see the film though. It seems like it will have an interesting style to it.
 
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