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watch SCARED- Short Anti-bullying Halloween Film

I made this film and I hope you all enjoy it I think its one of my best pieces and was just looking for some constructive criticism so I can improve and make a better film in the next project!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OxgXapJ9IPU
 
It's good, but it look far too long to get into. The story doesn't start moving until about a minute in. The black mask seemed unnecessary, the punch needed to be faster and more violent (sound effects and faster editing). Some scenes are shots seemed far too graded/corrected/incorrectly white balanced. It also wasn't really anything new. This seems like recycled material. The day for night was not convincing either.

But overall, well done. There were some nice elements to it, and there were some great aspects to the project overall.

Keep up the good work and keep improving.
 
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