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Round Two

swolff13

swolff13

Hey all -

Just finished my second short, looking for some honest critiques.

Note - nothing was staged or planned, most all shots were on the fly and spontaneous. So, while camera angle and lighting critiques are welcome, I'm looking more for comments on how to improve the flow, aesthetics, pace, etc.

Linkage: http://vimeo.com/34713384

Thanks!
 
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It was certainly a very touching film. :)

Can't really 'critique' it for you but I found it heartwarming and uplifting, and you're right that music does fit in perfectly. I did get the feeling it was going to be an advert for some kind of 'life recording' technology! Iphone, something like that, do you know how I mean? Haha :D
 
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