Review my screenplay

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Hi, I started this horror screenplay that I would appreciate if you guys would check out. It's only 15 pages of it I've posted.

https://www.scribd.com/document/357736433/Grotesque-Sample

 

[Quality]

I understand. But as I said typing has no feeling. If it were a face to face conversation you would have heard how I delivered that statement and realize it wasn't sarcastic.