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watch Really Bad Audition
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I like the idea of this. However, a few suggestions:
The audition just lasts too long. It stops being funny about halfway through. I'd rather watch the video if it was a minute long, it would be tighter and funnier throughout.
The back-scratch joke..I just don't see that as being funny.
I would make the ending less...abrupt. It's just the girl auditioning, the people at the table pretending to like her, and then just..talking. You should end it with maybe a scene of the people conducting the audition asking her to try harder, or telling her she probably didn't get the job, and her response to it. That way, you can have more jokes, as well as showing the apparent talents of Alisa more.
But it was a really good concept, those are just my opinions.
The audition just lasts too long. It stops being funny about halfway through. I'd rather watch the video if it was a minute long, it would be tighter and funnier throughout.
The back-scratch joke..I just don't see that as being funny.
I would make the ending less...abrupt. It's just the girl auditioning, the people at the table pretending to like her, and then just..talking. You should end it with maybe a scene of the people conducting the audition asking her to try harder, or telling her she probably didn't get the job, and her response to it. That way, you can have more jokes, as well as showing the apparent talents of Alisa more.
But it was a really good concept, those are just my opinions.
Ernest: Yeah. She's a good actress.
Theanthonyya: This is a complete version for the actress. I had 5 - 6 come in and read. Each one got a complete version for themselves. Each one did one thing specific to their character, and they all read the same awful sides. In the actual movie, there will just be a montage. But, I enjoy this one the most. But, thanks for the suggestions. Help is always appreciated.
Theanthonyya: This is a complete version for the actress. I had 5 - 6 come in and read. Each one got a complete version for themselves. Each one did one thing specific to their character, and they all read the same awful sides. In the actual movie, there will just be a montage. But, I enjoy this one the most. But, thanks for the suggestions. Help is always appreciated.
That's what i thought but the comment above mine (ie the comment i made b4 this one) made me doubt my first impression.
I'm not very good at explaining things.
I thought the back scratching joke made the whole thing! haha personal taste I guess
That's my favorite part also. Though Alisa's facial expression when she lifts her blouse is pretty priceless.
Leslie is a really cheap casting agent who shows up swigging vodka, and she has a mean rash that's making her scratch incessantly. It's some funny stuff, and she's an amazing actress. Now we just have to reshoot it all.
Definitely gotta see the final product!
