Penelope is sitting at the lunch table by herself.
PENELOP V.O
I had a visitor at lunch today.
Miranda approaches her
Miranda
Who's that on your sweatshirt?
PENELOPE
Wonder Woman
MIRANDA
Why?
PENELOPE
I dont know... i just really like her
MIRANDA
You like her...like
PENELOPE
No, like, i think she's really cool
Jamie walks up
Miranda
You think she's really cool..
PENELOPE
Yea, she's like perfect, strong , fearless, beautiful.
JAMIE
Everything you're not
MIRANDA
Okay..but do you have to wear it every day
PENELOPE
I dont know, it was a present from my dad when i was younger. so i just like to
Jamie
She's probably hiding fat behind it
Jamie laughs
Miranda
That doesn't mean you should wear it everyday. How does your mom let you leave home everyday like that
PENELOPE
...She's never home
MIRANDA
And your dad
PENELOPE
He died when i was 8
JAMIE
Thats not an excuse to look like...that
Miranda
Yea, do you realize how gross you look wearing that everday
PENELOPE
What i wear is none of your business
MIRANDA
Speak to me like that again and i'll kick your ass
this scene is suppose causes penelope to run away. How can i improve
PENELOP V.O
I had a visitor at lunch today.
Miranda approaches her
Miranda
Who's that on your sweatshirt?
PENELOPE
Wonder Woman
MIRANDA
Why?
PENELOPE
I dont know... i just really like her
MIRANDA
You like her...like
PENELOPE
No, like, i think she's really cool
Jamie walks up
Miranda
You think she's really cool..
PENELOPE
Yea, she's like perfect, strong , fearless, beautiful.
JAMIE
Everything you're not
MIRANDA
Okay..but do you have to wear it every day
PENELOPE
I dont know, it was a present from my dad when i was younger. so i just like to
Jamie
She's probably hiding fat behind it
Jamie laughs
Miranda
That doesn't mean you should wear it everyday. How does your mom let you leave home everyday like that
PENELOPE
...She's never home
MIRANDA
And your dad
PENELOPE
He died when i was 8
JAMIE
Thats not an excuse to look like...that
Miranda
Yea, do you realize how gross you look wearing that everday
PENELOPE
What i wear is none of your business
MIRANDA
Speak to me like that again and i'll kick your ass
this scene is suppose causes penelope to run away. How can i improve
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