Some feedback for improvements on future videos:
- camera work, lighting, and framing need some serious attention
- consider incorporating an actual concept into the video, maybe one that thematically ties into the song and lyrics
- experiment with set design, costumes, and make-up
- research and review some classic music videos and ones that you really like to use for inspiration
- always ask yourself What is making this shot interesting? and explore ways to make it better
hope those help. good luck!