Hey guys, and girls
So let me tell you some background about this short. 2 years ago i had a script, a really solid script for a short, but had no previous experience and no crew plus Real Actors didn't want to work with me. So I had this 3am Idea to shoot a (very short) short film, with me and a mate. I wrote a 4 page script revolving around 2 characters and at 6am we drove off to find this location. by 3pm we were finished. Now i did all of the editing and the rest of the stuff myself. So in that sense i know how bad (Amateur) it is. But was hoping for people to give me an honest opinion on the actual story and flow off the film
As right now i have made another short film, in which i think the story is great and so did every one else who worked on the current project, but in all honesty I am worried. The current project that I did, i again Directed myself, but am afraid of failing. I know that it is much better in terms of quality, but still as every one around me tells me that i am my own worst critique, i still feel a sense fear.
Part 1
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zZuXrYiTfok
Part 2
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PcD6SESU--8
So you probably wondering why am I asking to watch the first short film? Because that short film, in my mind feels like it has/had potential. It was SPOILERS!!!!! about how what if religion was a way that superior being (Aliens) controlled the evolutionary and technological progress of the man kind. Something Like Prometheus meets Star gate. and that a war of superior beings had come close to our galaxy, and that if we continued to advance our technological progress then we were becoming a target for other to attack. Think of how Thor in Avengers tell Nick Fury about how the phase 2 weapon program is what causes Loki and his allies to come to Earth and that it is a signal for every one else that Earth is ready for a new level of war.
So let me tell you some background about this short. 2 years ago i had a script, a really solid script for a short, but had no previous experience and no crew plus Real Actors didn't want to work with me. So I had this 3am Idea to shoot a (very short) short film, with me and a mate. I wrote a 4 page script revolving around 2 characters and at 6am we drove off to find this location. by 3pm we were finished. Now i did all of the editing and the rest of the stuff myself. So in that sense i know how bad (Amateur) it is. But was hoping for people to give me an honest opinion on the actual story and flow off the film
As right now i have made another short film, in which i think the story is great and so did every one else who worked on the current project, but in all honesty I am worried. The current project that I did, i again Directed myself, but am afraid of failing. I know that it is much better in terms of quality, but still as every one around me tells me that i am my own worst critique, i still feel a sense fear.
Part 1
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zZuXrYiTfok
Part 2
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PcD6SESU--8
So you probably wondering why am I asking to watch the first short film? Because that short film, in my mind feels like it has/had potential. It was SPOILERS!!!!! about how what if religion was a way that superior being (Aliens) controlled the evolutionary and technological progress of the man kind. Something Like Prometheus meets Star gate. and that a war of superior beings had come close to our galaxy, and that if we continued to advance our technological progress then we were becoming a target for other to attack. Think of how Thor in Avengers tell Nick Fury about how the phase 2 weapon program is what causes Loki and his allies to come to Earth and that it is a signal for every one else that Earth is ready for a new level of war.
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