I would like to write the following dialogue in one of my scripts, but I”m not a US native, so I might be wrong. Please tell me how it should sound. The point: The cop(Casper) doesn”t want the bad guys arrested, because he intends to manipulate them later...
911 VOICE
Copy all units. Multiple shots reported at the Easy Money casino.
CASPER
Negative, 911. Officer Casper Rychton, currently present at the casino.
911 VOICE
Copy, officer Rychton. What”s going on at the scene?
CASPER
Just some kids with firecrackers. Please call off the alarm.
911 VOICE
Confirmed. All units, please dismiss this warning.
It has some action in between. Thanks for helping me!
911 VOICE
Copy all units. Multiple shots reported at the Easy Money casino.
CASPER
Negative, 911. Officer Casper Rychton, currently present at the casino.
911 VOICE
Copy, officer Rychton. What”s going on at the scene?
CASPER
Just some kids with firecrackers. Please call off the alarm.
911 VOICE
Confirmed. All units, please dismiss this warning.
It has some action in between. Thanks for helping me!