archived-videos please criticize my short movie

[norveggie]

hello dear forum members,
me and a friend of mine made this movie for our film & lit. lesson, and would love to hear your comments on it. this is the third movie I've ever made. please tell me where I can improve and mistakes I did. I would like to improve my movie making skills.

here is a link to my movie, it is currently unlisted on youtube, I would like to hear comments and perfect my movie before posting it.

https://youtu.be/RE5gk8y0eDs

 

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[buscando]

There's some nice stuff here.
I think I would've liked it better if it was edited to 3/4 of its length or even less.
Her reactions after the elevators seem a bit slow, maybe those shots can be cut down.
Maybe for your next one you can tell your actor to speed things up a bit.
Good effort, good luck with it.