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Nice idea. Great color and believable locations.

My comments, take 'em with a grain of salt...
Use a tripod. AND a level. Composition could be better, remember the rule of three(s). No one (ever) talks like that -- great dialogue is tricky. Change some of the costuming to fit the era better.

You did good, I watched the whole thing too, was not bored. Curious where you would let the story go to.
 
Thanks for your reply! This is really only my third film that I've taken the time to plan out and edit, etc. This took about 6 hours total to shoot and edit, so I think it went pretty well, and as usual was a learning experience! Again, thank you for the advice! It is always appreciated
 
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