archived-videos Pedestrian Tales (my first documentary)

[CylentShadow]

This is the first documentary style project I made. It was a final project for my doc class at berkeley city college a few years ago. I wanna remake it longer with more subjects and a different title but am kinda busy with other stuff right now. Any comments or crits are welcome.
Enjoy
http://youtu.be/u-PkqQxfjmU
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u-PkqQxfjmU

 

[hepimedia]

- Love the concept, the selection of music in the beginning + the part "[...] and I'm a pedestrian" cracked me up, would love to hear more stories

Would just may be modify 2 things, remove the bike and the guitar and shut the door so the focus is fully on you and I would bring up the volume I couldn't hear all the stories. Also in post production may be increase the sharpness a tid bit, but the rest is good. Good story telling!