watch Our new short. Feedback please? :)

[metalgear141]

Me and my friend made this, we are currently working on part 2. Please let me know what you thought

Thanks

Jake

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=udNfYWFg_Bo&feature=channel_video_title

 

[Josiah]

Wow. This was excellent!

 

[drawbridgepictures]

I liked it. The only part that seemed a little odd to me was the strangulation with the rope. I think there should have been more of a struggle between the characters. But without a Part 2 and not much revealed in this video, I think it's good.

 

[rockerrockstar]

For a second I thought that the guy was his brother. Thus, the brother could have been faking his death and pretending to be the killer. Kidnapping his own brother. Then his brother ironically excapes kills him not knowing it is his brother from behind. What a twist that would be. It would be a prank gone completely wrong in a dark comedy way.