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Our House - Experimental/Cinematic Short Film

I like it - it looks lovely and the actors did a nice job.

From a writing perspective, you might consider giving the siblings different/contradictory memories of the place and the people.
 
Thank you so much for giving it a watch. Glad you liked the look and overall tone of the film. Yeah thinking about it now that would have been an interesting idea with contradictory memories.
 
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