archived-videos Our First Horror short.... with sound

It's a pretty neat idea, but it's lacking something.

I can't put my finger on it. I just feel that it wasn't scary enough. Maybe some more experienced filmmakers could give you some advice.
 
You're a prolific guy! Getting lots of practice is good. I recommend you start to refine your skills a bit now.

This piece has the look of something that was put together quickly -- rather disjointed, especially in the editing and shot planning. Made it difficult as a viewer to become immersed in the story, as I was often distracted trying to orient myself.

Also wasn't too sure if it was intended as a comedy or not. If so, it needed more laughs. If not, well, it was a bit too humorous to be taken seriously.
 
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