watch Opinions on "Feet" - camerawork + how do you do sound design?

[Pete]

Hey all!

I was bored a few nights ago, so I decided to make a video of my feet. I choreographed where I would go in about 5 minutes, but it took me a few tries to get most of the elements right. I'd love to hear any opinions on the handheld camerawork/focus pulling, and especially the sound design (how can they be improved?).

For sound, I just foley'd a bunch of my footsteps on the same floor as well as some of the ambiance in the room. I did not add any audio effects as I don't really know how to use them (let alone effectively), but I suspect that they would add a lot to the tone. So what would people suggest I change/improve in that department, for this video and for future reference?

Thanks a bunch!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wQxl4R8FuLk
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wQxl4R8FuLk

 

[Pete]

No dice? Oh well, like I said I was really bored when I made this. I am working on another video with a similar idea, however. This one will actually be thoroughly planned out, and hopefully of higher quality. Stay tuned!