I'm writing a horror screenplay and I'm uploading the opening to get some ideas on what people think. I'm only a senior in high school, so I know my writing isn't out of this world fantastic, but it's something I enjoy. I really like horror movies- who doesn't- and I've always wanted a career in making them. It's far fetched, I know- I'm intending to study political science in college- but it's always been a dream of mine. I'm rambling about nonsensical things that no one cares about. Anyways, I'd like some feedback about it. Especially formatting and what to include/not include. I haven't written many screenplays, so I wasn't sure about what to include.
Heres my mini-logline by the way:
After a series of inexplicable occurrences around their house, two siblings set out to document whatever-or whomever-is living in their house.
The link is below. I'm still working with the title- it's temporary at this point.
It's essentially based off a dream I had where a man was living in my house. He had some elaborate mansion right below our humble little home. It's quirky- I know- but I like the surreal nature of it all. I also feel like it has potential to be very stylish/atmospheric- especially the mansion beneath the ground. Oh, he killed my family at the end- a lovely dream, I know- so that's why it's horror.
https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&...NmJiYi00MDJhLWFiMDktNGE4MTBiZTMzMTky&hl=en_US
Thank you guys so much!
Heres my mini-logline by the way:
After a series of inexplicable occurrences around their house, two siblings set out to document whatever-or whomever-is living in their house.
The link is below. I'm still working with the title- it's temporary at this point.
It's essentially based off a dream I had where a man was living in my house. He had some elaborate mansion right below our humble little home. It's quirky- I know- but I like the surreal nature of it all. I also feel like it has potential to be very stylish/atmospheric- especially the mansion beneath the ground. Oh, he killed my family at the end- a lovely dream, I know- so that's why it's horror.
https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&...NmJiYi00MDJhLWFiMDktNGE4MTBiZTMzMTky&hl=en_US
Thank you guys so much!
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