Hey Guys
Basically I just wanted to make a space where we could pitch log lines for film ideas, tv pilots, short films, etc. and critique each other. I've been reading a lot of material lately that's been emphasising the fact that you need to nail down your log line before you even begin writing, so I thought we could do that here!
I'll start with one below, I have several in the bank I'm chipping away at the moment. Would love to hear yours too!

Basically I just wanted to make a space where we could pitch log lines for film ideas, tv pilots, short films, etc. and critique each other. I've been reading a lot of material lately that's been emphasising the fact that you need to nail down your log line before you even begin writing, so I thought we could do that here!
I'll start with one below, I have several in the bank I'm chipping away at the moment. Would love to hear yours too!