Here's a new trailer of my first feature film!
http://youtu.be/07FSKyYSev0
http://youtu.be/07FSKyYSev0
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New Trailer
- Thread starter LaVitaFilms
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That was pretty nice.
Few things:
I've got no idea what the plot is and, to be honest, it feels like it might be a little dull. There's a moment where she seems to hold a knife to the camera but, other than that, there's nothing to suggest that this might be a thriller/horror film. If it's not then what's it about? 75 minutes is quite a long time to just watch a couple of people's lives unfold.
And you should change the typeface of the title, it's just...yucky.
Other than that though, it's a nicely edited job. There seems to be the impression of a dashboard in the bottom left hand corner of the screen the whole time. Not sure why that's there but it looks kind of cool...
Few things:
I've got no idea what the plot is and, to be honest, it feels like it might be a little dull. There's a moment where she seems to hold a knife to the camera but, other than that, there's nothing to suggest that this might be a thriller/horror film. If it's not then what's it about? 75 minutes is quite a long time to just watch a couple of people's lives unfold.
And you should change the typeface of the title, it's just...yucky.
Other than that though, it's a nicely edited job. There seems to be the impression of a dashboard in the bottom left hand corner of the screen the whole time. Not sure why that's there but it looks kind of cool...