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archived-videos New short "Significant"...

I enjoyed this one quite a bit. The story is interesting. The thin guy delivering the beatdown is convincing. The cuts to the big guy were not quite as convincing.
 
Thanks for the view and taken the time for the feedback. I think your right on all fronts. Feel free to pass around if you know anyone who might give some honest critiques.
 
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