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New Promo video for my Thesis film Broken Roses...PLEASE Critique and Comment

Like the concept, the poetry is an interesting idea.

For me the production was a bit rough, your cameraman was obviously having trouble focussing... it can be difficult on DSLR... I'm assuming that's what you're shooting on from the look of your footage. Using some lighting equipment will improve the look dramatically and give your cameraman the ability to raise the aperture so that your moving subject stays in focus.

Your DP also needs to watch his ISO on the Til Death scene. Also the dialogue needs toning down in my opinion. Stop watching Tarantino films.

Sorry if that's a bit too critical.

Smith
 
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