archived-videos New Non-fiction

[JamesParsons]

Hey guys,

Here is the teaser for a new documentary that i am currently editing together.

http://vimeo.com/21521813

Please have a look and tell me what works and what doesn't.

Feel free to have a look at my other stuff and comment.

Many thanks

Jp

 

[Uranium City]

Real nice images. I'm a planehead so I'm looking forward to it.

Was it silent at the end, under the title? I might put some audio after the chopper sound crescendo, where you reveal the title. Music of some kind, pastoral.

 

[Cracker Funk]

What's up with that aspect-ratio? I don't really see the need for it. You didn't shoot it that way -- you're cropping your image, so you do have the option to revert back to 16:9. My honest two-cents -- it doesn't make it look more like a movie; it only makes it look like you're trying to make it look more like a movie.