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archived-videos new narrative reel

wow, really nice stuff in there :) i think you have stronger shots around the middle, maybe you could move one of those to the beginning to really hook people right when they start watching? just a suggestions. great job!
 
Thanks. I was thinking similar things. It's very difficult to put a reel together. I used the opening shot, which isn't that great, because I like the line that he says, "We want to shoot one of your sketches". I felt like it was me talking to a prospective client. But maybe it doesn't work. I'll have to mess around with it!
 
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