archived-videos Need critiquing please

[camopaint0707]

I am making hopefully an hour length movie. It's called the cheap car challenge and if you've never seen the show top gear. The premise is we have 3 cheap cars and do some challenges to see which car is the best deal. Here is the trailer I threw together last night in movie maker. I could use some help with it though.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=khhbKHIwfDc

 

[HIFF]

It's not really a trailer though. A trailer should be a lot more attention capturing and shorter. This one was difficult to watch, did not hold my attention.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=khhbKHIwfDc