archived-videos My Short Film - Looking for Feedback

[brendanbueno]

Hi! Looking for feedback on my short film. Would be very much appreciated

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LwlnI5o55uA

 

[8salacious9]

I didn't enjoy it, lacked anything solid for me to watch.

but i did get what you were trying to do, it just wasn't done very well.

 

[maxkissero]

mmmm I guess you'll hardly get any feedback from something like this. I personally didn't like it, but beyond that, there's nothing that anyone could tell you to do better. There's nothing that could be fixed or improved. It is what it is.

 

[ChimpPhobiaFilms]

It didn't do anything for me. It was just... uninteresting. It didn't entertain me or make me want to watch more. Sorry man

But hey, Welcome to IndieTalk!

 

[baoliun]

screen it at some local experimental film society/meetup and I wouldn't be surprised if you win something or get some good response

 

[MissingProductions]

Next time, light all the cigarettes!

 

[brendanbueno]

Thank you for all of the feedback here guys!
Basically, a friend and I set up green screen and camera, and just recorded our evening together, trying stupid things on camera.