archived-videos My short film - Beyond The Void

[Rich0]

A rough edit of a new short film I made for a uni project. It could in some regards be considered experimental. Sorry for the lame effects half way through, you have been warned .
The colour gonna get to be equally blue on every shot via grading as soon as I get time.

If you could critique any other aspect it would be much appreciated. Also if you could watch it a second time and let me know if watching it again made parts of it clearer or helped to elucidate certain elements. There's a reason I ask which I will reveal after a few responses.

Thanks

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RPEcDd9NxmM

 

[gorillaonabike]

Good effort.

Clearly, it's a rough cut and assume it's going to be cleaned up, better shots etc... chosen, shaky cam yadda yadda.

Assuming you're going to bring it into shape, as a rough cut, it has potential.

Only major issue which can't be cleaned up is the OTT acting.

 

[film_autre]

hated the framing of most of the shots, perhaps you could add crop marks then re-adjust the framing, it just feels like too much empty space around the edges thats not filled.