archived-videos My short film about the city Medulin in Croatia

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CloudXJan

My short film filmed in croatia :)
Film info: Music: Relaxing strings guitar acoustic love song.
Music2: Happy summer reggae Guitar Piano Organ Instrumental Beat.
Production: CLOUD- X (Jan Krevatin)
Web page: www.cloud-x.weebly.com
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BlcpSm-gqAE
 
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NickysFX said:
Captain Rayw , we need you buddy :lol:
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That "captain" moniker might be a wee ostentatious for me, but here goes... ;)


  • The shots are largely fine in composition.
  • Decent handheld technique. It's not easy!
  • Would have liked to see some "shots from a rolling vehicle", especially that Kamp Medulin entrance sign.
  • Shooting from even a gentle wave rocked boat isn't easy! :lol: Try crouching, loosening your knees and hips, hand stabilizing the camera while your legs get the feel for the wave motion to cancel it out. Might, might not work. :D
  • Just for tradition's sake, fade in video and audio @ beginning, and out at end.
  • The hard cuts in the middle are fine.
  • For a sensible video (which this is) ANYTHING with a horizon line in it probably should be level.
  • Save the off-angle and dutch angle shots for your wacky videos.
  • Try to collect usable location audio, overlay the soundtrack in @ about -20 to -25dB. Music should be "suggested" rather than "in your face." Although, since there was no location audio the soundtrack on this is fine.
  • Try to get more close ups, and play with your aperture - crank it open and get some bokeh in there! The "all f4/8/11" stuff gets meh pretty fast.
  • It's camp. Get people shots. (What?! No beach bunnies? D@mnation! :lol:)
  • Don't be afraid to tinker with the vividness on your NLE.
 
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