archived-videos My Short Animation--Please critique!!!

[breeson]

Hi Everyone:
Here Is my animated Short Film 'A Day In the Life'
Please let me know what you think!!

http://www.aniboom.com/video/290528/A-day-in-the-life/

If you like it please vote, so we can make more cartoons!

more cartoons at:

http://www.apt323.com/

http://www.breeson.blogspot.com

Thanks!
Breeson

 

[filmamateur]

The animation is great... I have concerns with sounds - the music seems a bit irritating...

 

[Monster]

I love the style but I would have to agreen on the sound. Would you mind telling me what program you use?

 

[breeson]

a day in the life

Thanks for the comments guys!

we used flash to make it,,
I agree,, the sound is pretty low tech,, basically just a crappy guitar and a mic,,, hopefully if we win this competition we'll have some cash for better equipement! Please help us and spread the link!!
I just posted a new comic on the blog,, check it out here

http://www.breeson.blogspot.com/

Thanks!!

Breeson