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[Lcaz]

http://vimeo.com/18476626

Feedback is greatly appreciated
The voice over leaves a lot to be desired i know.

 

[mahdy]

http://vimeo.com/18476626

Feedback is greatly appreciated
The voice over leaves a lot to be desired i know.

it's quite good..I kinda like it..very simple and appealing..
personally I think u should have cut at 02.00 then moved the camera infront of u and gave the flying expression..zoom didn't work well..
nice work..

 

[Lcaz]

Thank you, this was actually shot for a current challenge Philip Bloom has where you can win a state of the art HP computer.

And i just can't believe i didn't thought of moving the camera. I was originally thinking of using the original footage(without the zoom)

 

[gshiver]

Good job. Keep at it.