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archived-videos My latest wedding video

Perhaps spend a little longer on the wedding? It was over in the first 30 seconds, and though I liked the great fluid camerawork during the dancing scenes, I think the actual ceremony was over a little too quickly.
 
I agree with Ryi, the wedding seemed to take a backseat to all of the festivities afterward. I would be interested to see reactions of people in the audience while the ceremony is in progress (crying with joy and whatnot). Definitely also agree that the fluid dancing shots are cool. It seemed to end a little abruptly though, as if you ran out of memory card space.
 
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