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watch "My" first short in almost 2 years.

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Hey guys, just wanted to share with you "my" little short film I did with my acting group back in may over 4 hours... I put "" over "my" because I didn't write it but just directed it, filmed it and edited it and did the lighting, pre production and set and... well.... Ok, it is my film lol...

Anyway!... Here it is: https://youtu.be/dk-iGGLjpbw

If you can leave your feedback on youtube would be great if not it's ok, I understand, you don't want to leave your comments on youtube videos ermmm :cool:

Have a good week! :yes:
 
LDS said:
Hey guys, just wanted to share with you "my" little short film I did with my acting group back in may over 4 hours... I put "" over "my" because I didn't write it but just directed it, filmed it and edited it and did the lighting, pre production and set and... well.... Ok, it is my film lol...

Anyway!... Here it is: https://youtu.be/dk-iGGLjpbw

If you can leave your feedback on youtube would be great if not it's ok, I understand, you don't want to leave your comments on youtube videos ermmm :cool:

Have a good week! :yes:
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I checked it out. The acting was pretty good. The score was on point too. I think the lighting was a little too hot when the woman came through the door. For a noir I think it was lit a little too bright. I was expecting it to be more shadowy. Otherwise you did a nice job. Left a positive comment on the youtube too. Cheers!
 
Ahksquiat said:
I checked it out. The acting was pretty good. The score was on point too. I think the lighting was a little too hot when the woman came through the door. For a noir I think it was lit a little too bright. I was expecting it to be more shadowy. Otherwise you did a nice job. Left a positive comment on the youtube too. Cheers!
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thanks, and yes I agree, I failed with the lighting little bit, it was to strong but there were some time issues but, not gonna excuse myself. I agree with you.:yes::yes:
 
LDS said:
thanks, and yes I agree, I failed with the lighting little bit, it was to strong but there were some time issues but, not gonna excuse myself. I agree with you.:yes::yes:
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Cool. Its all good. At least you recognize it. That's what its about, learning from our mistakes. Its not a failure, just something to consider for next time.

When you get a chance you can check out some of my work below. If you like it, leave a comment on the youtube. Thanks!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7EumPGq3sJc
 
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