archived-videos My First Music Video

Congrats on completing this.

Great start: Will steal the initial idea but needed a real story to engage. Was a bit aimless.

Needs stronger cinematography.

Decent first effort and look forward to seeing where you go with this.
 
liked the editing alot, however I feel the pig mask lead to a massive downfall in hype, I was expecting some kind of dark gritty feeling but was lead with endless walking and pointless direction, in the end its a lady in a pigs mask who just walks..

this is my non-harsh opinion.
 
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