archived-videos My first HORROR Short Film :)

[Ja11en]

I was pretty proud of this but I don't know if it is what people want.. Please could I have some feedback and how I can improve. I am looking forward to making more in the future! Thanks!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d4g36KiDhD8

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d4g36KiDhD8

 

[M8Tty1694]

I like this, seems pretty good, would have been better if filmed at night though

 

[ChimpPhobiaFilms]

The music is a bit loud and high pitched. Some quieter, lower, more subtle music could have helped.
Making it darker with a quick grade, or shooting it at night could have helped push the intensity/fear.

Anyway, nice short. Everything else was pretty good.

 

[baoliun]

That was hilarious! I loled throughout