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My Doritos Superbowl commercial, HOW TO TRAIN YOUR MONSTER (funny)

Good luck. I don't think the violence is going to play well with a household brand like Doritos. The body-breaking is comical but the hard face slapping may be too much.
 
Really appreciate the feedback! Yes, I definitely agree that the violence might be a concern. I hope it reads as cartoony to the judges, which was my intention. I'll be crossing my fingers!

Thanks :)
 
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